Friday, 21 September 2012

100 word challenge - Zoe, Holly, Molly, Phoebe, Luke

....we were just sitting down for dinner when....

The door opened violently , there was a powercut it was pitch dark as the starry night.When the lights came back on we was searching for my little sister we thought she disapered.I had this feeling that someone was sneaking up behind me. Someone gentley tapped me on the shoulder several times. It was huge with fiery red eyes, bulging muscles and teeth as sharp as a sword. It looked terrifying. I still did not know what it was!

15 comments:

  1. wow what a super scarey story. you all got alot in a short storey.im scared to know what was behind you. well done kids. carol (zoes mom)

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  2. my nan is a good sewer and a good knitter but as well she is a good crossworder and story writer.
    zoe

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  3. Can i do a story of my own then you can go on my mums blog Carol's family blog.
    zoe

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  4. Well done all of you in mr aistons class..great imaginations. Zoes mom

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  5. My mum is always sending good and silly things to people.My mum says i have to share a present everywhere i go.
    Zoe Lauren Rose Beaman

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  6. Bonjour Mr Aiston i am feeding the fish.
    oh how do you spell goodbye in french.
    any way goodbye.
    Zoe.

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  7. What super scary story tellers you are! I can't wait to read the next one. From Holly's Mum

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  8. Goodbye in French is 'Au Revoir' Zoe!
    I loved your scary story - it gave me goosebumps, you could turn this into a super longer story!

    Mrs Mann.

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  9. What a scary story! I bet it would be even better if it were longer... I wonder what the scary creature behind you was and whether you found your sister. I enjoyed reading this, well done!

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    1. Well we were going to do that but we are going to do it next friday.
      From Zoe

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    2. I really am going to do that now because i will always do the rest and then get it straight onto the blog.
      Love Zoe Beaman Yeh I am a double digit tomorrow 10.

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  10. Ive just read the story out to my mom she thinks its really good.
    from molly and jake

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  11. i think that we worked really hard on that story my job was typing as im good at it
    from molly

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    1. Molly That Was Actually Me You Know But You Did Type Abit Of It.
      From Zoe Beaman

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  12. i realy like your story guys you were great i wonder who thought about it.
    jessica

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