Friday, 28 September 2012

Malachi, Jacb, Jack - 100 word challenge

1000 years ago!

"Run to the shelter, it's the alarm!"

The alarm was like an out of tune piano. It was tiny but you could hear it a mile away. As the mysterious longboat  got closer and closer to the shore. Our brave, strong viking warriors lined up to see if they these strange monsters of men were here to cause havoc! Our strong viking warriors, lightning fast, strong oxs were  an axe nothing can get past them.then the mosters exploded on to the bright green grass and all of a sudden it turned smoky.

1 comment:

  1. What a great start to the story. You must have a great imagination. Some fantastic metaphors!

    Hollie Aiston

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