Once upon a time there was a man named Oden he was a god .One day he got extremeley bored so he walked away and thought about what he was going to do.Then an idea shot into his head then he thought that he could so he gave it a shot. He tried and tried and finally made sky and the first place on earth, it was snowy blowy and very uncomfortable the snow looked like sugar and flower. Secondly he built the second bit of land name Midgard it was beutifal, it was a human land, it was gorgeous there was no sound and not a cloud in the sky. Next he created humans, they were very sweet and were very cheerful. After that he built Agard, the city for gods, in that city he built a luxourious palace made of gold it looked lovely and also hade a beautifaul multicoloured rainbow.Jamie
That is a beautiful story and sounds like a lovely place to be. I'd like to visit some time. Jamie's mum.
One day the great God Odin decided to create the world.The Gods decieded to make a home for their enimies the giants not a brilliant home a whole land of ice nothing but iceburgs and freezing sea.Then suddenly the Gods got bored so they desinged land for the humans with rivers, and lots of greeney. Sunshine always shone a perfect shine . But it was not good with no humans so the intelligent gods created two very, hairy humans and they lived there. Odin shouted where will we live? A golden palace gold in the day and silver in the night Odin said in his head.we shall live here for ever.
One day there lived a god called Odin he decided to create the world because it was so boring so he thought that he would make it more fun. He explained that he wanted to make a place full of ice for Giants. It's not brillant but it will do Odin thought and then a cold breeze came out of his mouth. Then he said he wanted to make a home for people. He held his hands together then appeared a beautiful place full of green grass and trees. He sighed but there's no people! So he rubbed two trees together and a male and a female appeared and they lived there. Then I mumbled where am I gonna sleep and then in a woosh a ginormous casle appeared out of the ground! It was gold when the sun was out and it was silver when the moon was on it. And he made a rainbow bridge appear so people could walk over to the casle and he lived happily ever after.
One day Odin thought "I'm going to build places " So he did . First he built the land for the giants to live in ,although to him giants are enemies. After that he made the human world and put people on it . At last he made a castle not a brick castle, a golden brick castle! For the last touch he made a bridge out of a a giant colourful rainbow to walk on. At last they had a place to live in, the amazing thing was that it glowed at night.Emily
I loved my first day in Mr Aistons class Cameron
i loved being at school today after i had my tea i told my mom to drop me back at school it was so fun mr aiston olivia x
My first day back at school was amazing! Mr Aiston is the best teacher EVER!!!!!!!!Bethan
look i have been trying my very best on the vikings so i made thisVery fast at killingIn there places King of vikingsIs so fisteyNapping in there tentsGetting reddy for telling stories Stories are changing the vikings are are reddyolivia
Wow. Great stuff Olivia. Glad you enjoyed your first day Bethan, loved your re telling of the story of Odin using actions!!
thank you mr aiston you rock :)!!!
One day a god called Odin thought he would make the world more exciting. First he took a deep breath and blew out an icy cold wind which created huge white mountains and frosty lakes, which would be the home of the giants.Next he took a softer breath and blew out a warm breeze. This made grass, trees and flowers spring out of the earth like a jack-in-the-box. Then he squeezed 2 trees and they turned into two hairy humans. Finally he made an enormous colourful castle with a rainbow bridge arching over to the land. Bethan
Fantastic use of connectives to structure your work. Some lovely adjectives and a simile as well! Move your rocket up!
Once there lived, a viking who was born first, and his name was Odin. Odin had made the Vikings all around the world and even made countries. But until their enemies came the giants. Odin had made 3 different places. Number 1 had had an enormous breath and a beautiful land, that had cold breezes and tall white mountains and ,cold, hard, icy rivers that giants could break and drink the cold waters. Number 2 had a peacefull land with trees , flowers and warm breezes.But Odin made all the trees to big , hairy adults and all the flowers to there little babies. Then last off all Odin made another land with a enormous colourful castle with a rainbow bridge arching over to the land.Zoe Beaman
Fantastic stuff Zoe!! Some brilliant adjectives. Remember to try and use adverbs to describe how the giants drank the water and how the flowers blew in the breeze. Very impressed.
one day there was a man called odin he wonted to make the world better place first of all he made a humungas white mountins like snow secandly he made and over exciting stuth that will be the home for the masive giants im only doing half natasha
Dear Mr Aiston I really like Secret Kingdom books can I bring in the 1 I am on to school for you to read around the campfire, please?Phoebe
Yes Phoebe. That sounds great!
All these stories are great! Well done Year 5! Keep up all the hard work - I'll be in to hear some of these very, very soon! Mrs Bishton
Long long ago there was a god called odin and he was bord so he first blew a cold wind to make a home for the giants. Next he blew a warm wind and made a land for the humans he rubbed two trees and made hairy people. After a while he made a castle made out of gold. So that is how the whorld was made.jessica
Wow Jessica. Love this!!
One day Odin the leader of the viking gods desidedto make a world.first he made the city of the giants.He made a chilly cold damp horrible city coverd in snow and hills.Though the giants were his enimies.Suddenly he got an idea.closey follawed by breath soothing smoothly down the new land he named itMidgard. Then golden mist flew up in the air and developed a golden castle and called Asgard.To finish it all up a rainbow soaring across the sky that connected from Asgard to Midgard and that the story of Odin.by cameron price
i like your writing cameron is that joined with Jessicas story? thankyou for doing a lovely story. madeleine (mr aistons little girl)
loved the litaracy on thursdayholly
once upon a time there lived a girl called hera she was inbvited to some kind of a celibration and she doesnt now what to where .but she wonted to have somthing more so she said i wont jewlry because people have seen me in my bold clo0thes but the man said u look buetiful in them clothes her a said nooooo i wont it now because i need to be buetiful so she went out of the castle and over the colurful rainbow bridge.so she went and to e conytinud natasha