Well done, Bethan! I found your story fascinating as you described what happened on Christmas Eve. I remember how excited I was at your age when it came around.@RossMannellTeacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Wow great writing Bethan great punctuation it was funny in some part's I really liked it Great workPlace come and comment on my blog The mighty ash class blog
I have. Your blog is cool. Thanks for coming on ours.Bethan
Wow bethan! I loved your work some day I will write more than you.
You'll have to try hard.
You must be so proud to have your work on here! Well done you! Miss Clifford
I am.Thanks for coming on our blog.Bethan
Wow Bethan. I Will Try Hard To Write More Than You.Zoe
you did lots of writing then,I wih i could write as much as you well done from callum
Mr Aiston can you put someones work from to day?
i love your peace of writing Bethan.From Alex