Monday, 11 February 2013

100 word challenge - Alex, Ste and Dom

Mum flipped the pancake up but as Mum flipped it tuned into a evil super man but he flew out of the window and making the city turn to pancake world and  he was the pancake king and my famly were pancake slaves. And we hato seave pancaces to him people hato live in pancake buildings and houses as people saw cares going to pancake.Car park   and they were pancakes too it was scary  I had too go too pancake school and pancake colege   my Dad was sick of it he was so angry.But I coudnt change it  t hought.

2 comments:

  1. Some great ideas as always boys but you need to check your spellings!!
    Keep up the hard work.

    Mr.Aiston

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