Monday, 11 February 2013

100 word challenge - Emily - Jayne

Mum flipped the pancake up but however when she did something happend, the pancake was so thick and tough it broke the roof of the kitchen .The worse thing was that it had fell on me, "OWWWWWWWWWW"!as it fell on me with a hard smash . When my mom checked if I was alright, I was not.I was completely swashed under the roof with my face flat on the floor.becuse of that happernining i ended up going to hospital ."NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"!. As for that my mom had to get a compony to fix the roof.

1 comment:

  1. You always enjoy the 100 word challenge! Good use of speech marks but don't forget capital letters!

    Mr.aiston

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