Monday, 11 February 2013

100 word challenge - William, Callum, Jack.

I was in the kitchen minding my own buisness, but suddendly my mum came bursting through the door demanding"It's pancake day!"
"Alright Mum, keep your hair on," Bert replied.

After that Bert's mum flipped the pancake up but then it hit the roof and a pancake monster appeard on the floor.
"I am going to eat your pancake hahahahahahaha"screamed  the monster.
The monster sprinted in to action. Bert and his Mum sprinted out of there door screaming there heads of. Just then are best nabour brought out his knife and he cut the pancake monster in to a half .


  1. Hi jacky chan, william and callum well done on the part .When berts mom came bursting threw the door.Also I like that you have used alot of speech in your work.

    your sincerley
    MALACHI AND TOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. Tom and Malachi were vs MESSI AND RANOLDO in wembeley staduiam.Everybody was at the staduiam .The first day that all the fans found out that tickets were out , in an hour they where gone.The big game came Tom and Malachi were ready ,so was Ranoldo and Messi ... you have to go on youtube too find out who won.

  3. welldone Jack,Callum and William it was a great story.
    from x ?????