Monday, 25 March 2013

Molly , Olivia and luke 100 word challenge

Molly and Olivia ran to the old shop door , their was crowds and crowds of people waiting for the latest chocolate bar stored in shops . As Molly and Olivia sprinted towards the counter . all of a sudden Molly and Olivia found their self looking at all that chocolate ... Olivia suddenly fainted ! The shop keeper ran from behind her counter to help her . Whilst the lady was helping Olivia , Molly ran to get some chocolate from the counter more and more people grabbed the free chocolate from the counter swiping the plate clean !!

1 comment:

  1. My sympathy is with the shopkeeper, but of course I hope Olivia recovers. You have used words well to show quick action :- ran, sprinted,all of a sudden,grabbed. Well done, I enjoyed your story.

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